The moment you have all been waiting for is here!! Here is the first 3 chapters of my book, I can’t say its the official published version, but I think it’s pretty close. Please follow the link to read it. If you’d like to leave me feedback or if you find any typos please let me know what you think in the comments! So far I’ve received positive comments so I hope you all enjoy it!! It’s a YA sci-fi/fantasy novel.
Thanks to some awesome feedback from a fellow author I was able to re-vamp the book description, so without further ado, here is my preview of The Becoming, first book in the Oblivion series.
After spending her whole life moving around, Alice Heatherly is looking forward to a fresh start. When she moves to a new city for her first year of university she wants nothing more than to put down some roots and make friends but instead she meets Dawson. With one word from him — Ignea — her whole life is upended. When she is attacked by a red-eyed shadow and finds herself caught in an ancient battle between two warring realms — one that consumes worlds, and one trying to defend them — she begins to question her own sanity. Soon her whole existence comes into question, and she is faced with a decision she doesn’t have an answer to. Her one salvation is Dawson, the only person she can trust, but when he is pitted against the very forces he works for Alice can’t be sure she’ll make it out alive.
***UPDATE Feb 3, 2014***
Chapter 2 is undergoing some restructuring so I am taking down this version temporarily. I’m hoping to have the re-vamped preview available by the end of the week. If you’ve found yourself here thanks for your interest! I hope you’ll come back to see the new and improved version!
***UPDATE Mar 1, 2014***
In the off chance you’ve found yourself here, I have officially updated my book preview of chp 1-3. It is posted on my main page now. It is also available via shortlink on my Facebook and Twitter pages.